[dns-wg] revised text for NTIA response - v4

On 3 nov 2008, at 18.05, bmanning at vacation.karoshi.com wrote:

> 	I think a more pragmatic reply (if the previous points are to
> 	be respected) would be something along these lines:
>
> 10. The organization that generates the root zone file must sign the
> file and therefore must hold the private part of the zone signing key.
>
> or
>
> 10. The organization that generates the root zone file must have  
> unfettered
> access to the zone signing key components.
>
>
> 	I have a slight inclination towards the second.

I think the first of these is better as the word "unfettered" is not  
easy to understand if one is not english speaking. I for one have no  
idea what it means...

The simpler the text, the better.

    Patrik