[enum-wg] Discuss: draft-hoeneisen-enum-validation-epp-01

Hi Edward!

On Mon, 6 Jun 2005, Edward Lewis wrote:

>>   * http://ietf.hoeneisen.ch/draft-hoeneisen-enum-validation-epp-01.txt
>
> 1) In 4.5.1 and 4.5.2, you refer to "The Registry".  By this I assume you 
> mean the server-side organization of the EPP connection and not IANA.

Yes, with Registry I always mean the EPP Server side and not IANA.
Maybe I should think about an additional definitions section or refer the 
the definitions in the enum.at draft.

> 2) s/The validation process shall ensure,/The validation process shall 
> ensure/ (The "dreaded extraneous comma.")

Yep! Will be corrected in the next version.

Thanks for your feedback!

cheers,
  Bernie