<html><body style="font-family: 'Helvetica Neue',Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 12px;"><br /><p class="MsoNormal">Thank you for the draft.</p>
<p class="MsoNormal">I am pleased to see the initial descriptions of RIPE and of
RIPE NCC on page 4.</p>
<p class="MsoNormal">I support the recognition of the risks of
over-documentation on page 15.</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I noticed two typos:</p>
<p class="MsoNormal">p10 "will only refer to consensus, which this is
the term used in RIPE Documents. "</p>
<p class="MsoNormal">p16 “Obsolete documents are clearly market…”</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Regards</p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Steve Nash</p>
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