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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">Sasha, <br>
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THANK YOU for contributing such a stellar draft! I've gone through
and made some edits, some more British spelling-isms + putting
some of the goals in active tense. I also made the scope (in terms
of who it applies to) a bit more explicit. <br>
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Warm regards, <br>
<br>
Amanda <br>
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On 08/04/2019 10:36, John Springer wrote:<br>
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<div dir="ltr">I agree, excellent work!
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<div>I have suggest some minor edits of the Response guide.</div>
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<div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Sat, Apr 6, 2019 at 5:10 AM
David Huberman <<a href="mailto:david.huberman@icann.org"
moz-do-not-send="true">david.huberman@icann.org</a>>
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The draft CoC is quite excellent. Nice work! I have completed
a copyediting pass in "suggesting" mode: <br>
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- normalized words to British English spellings (3 instances
of behavior were changed to behaviour)<br>
- removed contractions<br>
- fixed a few typos<br>
- enforced consistent paragraph spacing<br>
- enforced the Oxford comma <br>
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/david<br>
writing solely on his personal behalf<br>
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On 4/5/19, 7:32 AM, "diversity on behalf of Sasha Romijn"
<<a href="mailto:diversity-bounces@ripe.net"
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on behalf of <a href="mailto:sasha@mxsasha.eu"
target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">sasha@mxsasha.eu</a>>
wrote:<br>
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Hello all,<br>
<br>
Closely based on the work I did for Write the Docs, with
some adjustments to fit the RIPE community, I put together a
draft for a CoC and for a response guide.<br>
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CoC:<br>
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Response guide:<br>
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I went with Google docs for now, as it’s quite accessible.
You can leave comments and suggest changes, and we can discuss
broader topics on the mailing list. There are a few parts
about structure still to be filled in, but let’s start here.<br>
We haven’t really spoken about any of the details, other
than a general “this can be a starting point”, so I don’t know
what kind of discussions other people would like to bring up.<br>
<br>
Sasha<br>
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