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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">Sasha, <br>
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      THANK YOU for contributing such a stellar draft! I've gone through
      and made some edits, some more British spelling-isms + putting
      some of the goals in active tense. I also made the scope (in terms
      of who it applies to) a bit more explicit. <br>
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      Warm regards, <br>
      <br>
      Amanda <br>
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      On 08/04/2019 10:36, John Springer wrote:<br>
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      <div dir="ltr">I agree, excellent work! 
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        <div>I have suggest some minor edits of the Response guide.</div>
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        <div>John Springer</div>
        <div>acting solely on my own behalf</div>
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        <div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Sat, Apr 6, 2019 at 5:10 AM
          David Huberman <<a href="mailto:david.huberman@icann.org"
            moz-do-not-send="true">david.huberman@icann.org</a>>
          wrote:<br>
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          0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">Sasha,<br>
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          The draft CoC is quite excellent. Nice work!  I have completed
          a copyediting pass in "suggesting" mode:  <br>
          <br>
          - normalized words to British English spellings (3 instances
          of behavior were changed to behaviour)<br>
          - removed contractions<br>
          - fixed a few typos<br>
          - enforced consistent paragraph spacing<br>
          - enforced the Oxford comma <br>
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          /david<br>
          writing solely on his personal behalf<br>
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          On 4/5/19, 7:32 AM, "diversity on behalf of Sasha Romijn"
          <<a href="mailto:diversity-bounces@ripe.net"
            target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">diversity-bounces@ripe.net</a>
          on behalf of <a href="mailto:sasha@mxsasha.eu"
            target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">sasha@mxsasha.eu</a>>
          wrote:<br>
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              Hello all,<br>
          <br>
              Closely based on the work I did for Write the Docs, with
          some adjustments to fit the RIPE community, I put together a
          draft for a CoC and for a response guide.<br>
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              CoC:<br>
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href="https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__docs.google.com_document_d_1IAJj9UjW2zroz5v6XQYgYEYotfZlV4Trk2vRdaoPaP4_edit&d=DwIGaQ&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=iTOW7nSt3tBCc5xNiHfQNhFilU9Ki9_nVAHGfa3QG5w&m=ag_h5GXVGbSsDgGW59YleMXVaOJnV4ga6CJcCIfZ38A&s=sy8t_T8v902B5ESqiOxzVnu6ezEWJaYUIsfScYJuvyY&e="
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              Response guide:<br>
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              I went with Google docs for now, as it’s quite accessible.
          You can leave comments and suggest changes, and we can discuss
          broader topics on the mailing list. There are a few parts
          about structure still to be filled in, but let’s start here.<br>
              We haven’t really spoken about any of the details, other
          than a general “this can be a starting point”, so I don’t know
          what kind of discussions other people would like to bring up.<br>
          <br>
              Sasha<br>
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