[cooperation-wg] Fwd: [NRO-IANAXFER] Final call for comments closed Re: Internet Number Community IANA Stewardship Proposal: Final Call for Comments

Dear Colleagues,

Thank you all for your valuable input on the CRISP draft proposal. 

Please see the mail below from the CRISP Chair Izumi Okutani about the next steps in incorporating the input received and developing the final version to be submitted to the ICG. 

Kind regards,

Nurani 
On behalf of the CRISP RIPE team 


Begin forwarded message:

> From: Izumi Okutani <izumi at nic.ad.jp>
> Subject: [NRO-IANAXFER] Final call for comments closed Re: Internet Number Community IANA Stewardship Proposal: Final Call for Comments
> Date: 13 januari 2015 03:32:49 CET
> To: "ianaxfer at nro.net" <ianaxfer at nro.net>
> 
> Dear Colleagues,
> 
> 
> Thank you for all the inputs you have given to the second draft of our
> proposal.
> 
> 
> The CRISP Team now has moved into developing our proposal to be
> submitted to the ICG on 15th Jan based on the comments received before
> 12 Jan 2015, 23:59 UTC.
> 
> 
> 
> Best Regards,
> Izumi Okutani
> The CRISP Team
> 
> On 2015/01/13 2:57, Izumi Okutani wrote:
>> Dear Colleagues,
>> 
>> 
>> This is a reminder that the CRISP Team will close to receive all
>> comments for the second draft of our proposal as of :
>> 
>>>     Second draft comments close	    : 12 Jan 2015, 23:59 UTC
>> 
>> 
>> Please send in all your comments before the above time, for the CRISP
>> Team to consider your input in developing the final proopsal to be
>> submitted to the ICG.
>> 
>> 
>> Thank you to those who have expressed and shared your comments on this
>> list already.
>> 
>> 
>> Best Regards,
>> Izumi Okutani
>> The CRISP Team
>> 
>> 
>> On 2015/01/09 1:21, Izumi Okutani wrote:
>>> Dear colleagues,
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Please find the second draft of the Internet numbers community's
>>> response to the Request For Proposals issued by the IANA Stewardship
>>> Coordination Group (ICG).
>>> 
>>> This draft has been prepared by the Consolidated RIR IANA Stewardship
>>> Proposal (CRISP) Team, with considerations of feedback received from the
>>> global community on <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list.
>>> 
>>> We have incorporated the following key points in the second draft:
>>> 
>>>    - Additional description on contract details, review committee and
>>>      intellectual property rights
>>>    - Description revised on Section V. NITA Requirements and VI.
>>>      Community Process for more clarity
>>>    - No changes are made to key elements of the proposal
>>> 
>>> The CRISP Team have considered all comments expressed on
>>> <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list before the deadline of 5th Jan 2015, and
>>> would now like to make the final call for comments from the global
>>> community on the draft proposal, before submitting to the ICG.
>>> 
>>> Second Draft proposal:
>>> ------------------------
>>>   Clean Version  :
>>>   <http://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-second-draft>
>>> 
>>>   Redline Version:
>>>   <http:/www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-second-draft-change-control>
>>> 
>>>   The deadline for providing feedback: Mon, 12 January 2015 23:59 UTC
>>>   Feedback should be sent to         : <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list
>>> 
>>> Community Inputs Considered by the CRISP Team:
>>> ------------------------------------------
>>>   You can check the status of the issues raised by the community and
>>>   proposed the CRISP Team positions at:
>>> 
>>>     <http://www.nro.net/crisp-iana-xfer-summary-discussion-08012015>
>>> 
>>> Key dates:
>>> -----------
>>>     Second draft to be published	    :  8 Jan 2015
>>>     Second draft comments close	    : 12 Jan 2015, 23:59 UTC
>>>     Final proposal to be sent to ICG : 15 Jan 2015
>>> 
>>> How to Engage in Discussions:
>>> -----------------------------
>>>    All global discussions, for the CRISP team to consider as community
>>>    feedback, will be conducted at <ianaxfer at nro.net> mailing list.
>>>    All the CRISP Team discussions are open to observers.
>>> 
>>> Next Step:
>>> -----------
>>>    In developing the final draft based on further feedback, the CRISP
>>>    Team will ensure it has completed considerations of all substantial
>>>    issues raised by the global community, which are compiled in the
>>>    published issues list. The proposal will only incorporate issues that
>>>    the CRISP team believes have received consensus support from the
>>>    community.
>>> 
>>> References:
>>> ------------
>>> * Discussions by the CRISP Team
>>>      Details of all the CRISP team's work to date, including recordings,
>>>      minutes and agendas of all the CRISP Team teleconferences and a
>>>      public archive of the internal CRISP team mailing list, are
>>>      available at:
>>>      https://nro.net/crisp-team
>>> 
>>> * Other links:
>>>    - The ICG request for proposals:
>>>     <https://www.icann.org/news/announcement-3-2014-09-03-en>
>>> 
>>>    - The IANA Stewardship Transition Discussion in each RIR region:
>>>      <http://www.nro.net/timeline-engagement>
>>> 
>>>    - First Draft proposal (Edited version)
>>>      <http://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-first-draft-1-1>
>>> 
>> 
> 
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